Evidence #28 | September 19, 2020
Book of Mormon Evidence: Gradation Parallelism
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Abstract
The Book of Mormon’s use of a parallelism known as “gradation” appears to be intentional, rhetorically appropriate, and consistent with the text’s own claimed ancient Near Eastern literary background.Gradation in the Bible
A parallel structure known as “gradation”1 can be found in both the Old and New Testaments. As described by Donald W. Parry, this parallelism “occurs when the same word or words are found in successive clauses or sentences.”2 As demonstrated in the following examples, “This duplication of words creates a continuation of thought from one sentence to the next, which adds power through repetition to the discourse, while at the same time connecting the lines into an inseparable body”:3
And it shall come to pass in that day,
I will hear, saith the Lord,
I will hear the
heavens, and
they shall hear the
Earth and the
earth shall hear the
corn, and the wine, and the oil; and
they shall hear Jezreel.
Tell ye
your children of it, and let
your children tell
their children, and
their children another generation. That which the palmerworm hath left hath the
locust eaten; and that which the
locust hath left hath the
cankerworm eaten; and that which the
cankerworm hath left hath the
caterpiller eaten.
And not only so, but we glory in
tribulations also: knowing that
tribulation worketh
patience; And
patience,
experience; and
experience,
hope: And
hope maketh not ashamed …
And beside this, giving all diligence, add to your faith
virtue; and to
virtue
knowledge; And to
knowledge
temperance; and to
temperance
patience; and to
patience
godliness; And to
godliness
brotherly kindness; and to
brotherly kindness charity.
Gradation in the Book of Mormon
In his reformatted edition of the Book of Mormon, Parry identified numerous examples of gradation (see Appendix). While it can never be demonstrated that any parallelism was intentionally implemented, it is hard to imagine that some of Parry’s proposed examples of gradation occurred by pure coincidence. For instance, notice how the following samples from Alma are very compact. Each repeated concept is important to the message, each repetition closely follows the previous one, and there are few instances of random repetition of content-rich words:
Now, how could a man repent except he should
sin? How could he
sin if there was no
law? How could there be a
law save there was a
punishment? Now, there was a
punishment affixed, and a just
law given, which brought remorse of conscience unto man. Now, if there was no
law given—if a man murdered he should
die—would he be afraid he would
die if he should murder? And also, if there was no law given against
sin men would not be afraid to
sin.
… if not so, the works of justice would be destroyed, and God would
cease to be God. But God
ceaseth not to be God, and
mercy claimeth the penitent, and
mercy cometh because of the
atonement; and the
atonement bringeth to pass the
resurrection of the dead; and the
resurrection of the dead bringeth back men into the
presence of God; and thus they are restored into his
presence, to be judged according to their works …
Some consistencies are also noteworthy. All of the proposed instances of gradation in the Book of Mormon appear to be derived from first-hand statements usually found in embedded or underlying documents, rather than in editorial commentary from Mormon or Moroni. Most examples can be found in sermons, letters, and prophecies.4 The single proposed instance that appears in historical narrative (1 Nephi 7:20–22) seems somewhat less convincing in regard to its intentionality.5
Also of interest is that several proposed examples cluster together in a single author’s prophecy or teachings. Nephi used gradation in four successive chapters that detail his expansive visions and prophecies about the Messiah and his people (see 1 Nephi 12:19–13:5; 13:23–24; 14:1–3; 15:13–20). Alma used three instances of gradation when instructing his son Corianton (see Alma 41:13; 42:17–20; 42:22–23). And Moroni used the structure twice in the very last chapter of the Book of Mormon (see Moroni 10:20–22, 32–34).
These clusters seem indicative of authors who made a conscious choice to repeatedly utilize this parallel structure for certain reasons on certain occasions. The way that the structure builds upon successive ideas, for example, was likely ideal for Alma’s delineation of the nature of law and punishment (Alma 42:17–20) or for Moroni’s doctrinal explanation of faith, hope, and charity (Moroni 10:20–22).
Conclusion
Although not as elusive or as difficult to implement as some other parallel structures, such as chiasmus, gradation is still a noteworthy parallelism. Its attestations in the Book of Mormon are rhetorically meaningful and consistent with the text’s claimed ancient Near Eastern literary background.
Donald W. Parry, Poetic Parallelisms in the Book of Mormon: The Complete Text Reformatted (Provo, UT: Neal A. Maxwell Institute for Religious Scholarship, 2007), xxvi–xxviii, 566.
Donald W. Parry, “Climactic Forms in the Book of Mormon,” in Reexploring the Book of Mormon: A Decade of New Research, ed. John W. Welch (Provo and Salt Lake City, UT: FARMS and Deseret Book, 1992), 85.
Examples of Gradation in the Book of Mormon6
1 Nephi 7:20–22
… they did bow down before me, and did plead with me that I would
forgive them of the thing that they had done against me. And it came to pass that I did frankly
forgive them all that they had done, and I did exhort them that they would
pray unto the Lord their God for forgiveness. And it came to pass that they did so.
And after they had done
praying unto the Lord we did again travel on our journey towards the tent of our father.
And it came to pass that we did
come down unto the tent of our father.
And after I and my brethren and all the house of Ishmael had
come down unto the tent of my father, they did give thanks unto the Lord their God …
1 Nephi 10:11
And it came to pass after my father had spoken these words he spake unto my brethren
concerning the gospel which should be preached among the Jews, and also
concerning the dwindling of the Jews in unbelief.
And after they had slain the Messiah, who should come,
and after he had been slain he
should rise from the dead, and
should make himself manifest, by the Holy Ghost, unto the Gentiles.
1 Nephi 12:19–13:5
… and because of the pride of my seed, and the temptations of the devil, I beheld that the
seed of my brethren did overpower the people of my seed.
And it came to pass that I beheld, and saw the people of the
seed of my brethren that they had overcome my seed; and they went forth
in multitudes upon the face of the land. And I saw them gathered together
in multitudes; and I saw
wars and rumors of wars among them; and in
wars and rumors of wars I saw many generations pass away.
And the angel said unto me: Behold these shall
dwindle in unbelief. And it came to pass that I beheld, after they had
dwindled in unbelief they became a dark, and loathsome, and a filthy people, full of idleness
and all manner of abominations.
And it came to pass that the angel spake unto me, saying:
Look! And I
looked and beheld
many nations and kingdoms. And the angel said unto me:
What beholdest thou? And I said: I behold
many nations and kingdoms. And he said unto me: These are the
nations and kingdoms of the Gentiles. And it came to pass that I saw among the
nations of the Gentiles
the formation of a great church. And the angel said unto me: Behold
the formation of a church which is most abominable above all other churches
1 Nephi 13:23–24
And he said: Behold it proceedeth out of the mouth of a
Jew. And I, Nephi, beheld it; and he said unto me:
The book that thou beholdest is a record of the
Jews, which
contains the covenants of the Lord, which he hath made unto the house of Israel; and it also
containeth many of the prophecies of the holy prophets; and it is a record like unto the
engravings which are upon the plates of brass, save there are not so many;
nevertheless, they
contain the covenants of the Lord, which he hath made unto the house of Israel; wherefore,
they are of great worth unto the Gentiles. And the angel of the Lord said unto me:
Thou hast beheld that the book
proceeded forth from the mouth of a Jew; and when it
proceeded forth from the mouth of a Jew it contained the fulness of the
gospel of the Lord, of whom the twelve apostles
bear record; and they
bear record according to the truth which is in the Lamb of God.
1 Nephi 14:1–3
And it shall come to pass, that if the Gentiles shall hearken unto the
Lamb of God in that day that he shall manifest himself unto them in word, and also in power, in
very deed, unto the taking away of their stumbling blocks—And harden not their hearts against the
Lamb of God,
they shall be numbered among the seed of thy father; yea,
they shall be numbered among the house of Israel; and they shall be a
blessed people upon the promised land forever; they shall be
no more brought down into captivity; and the house of Israel shall
no more be confounded. And
that great pit, which hath been digged for them by that great and abominable church, which
was founded by the devil and his children, that he might lead away the souls of men down to hell—yea,
that great pit which hath been digged for the
destruction of men shall be filled by those who digged it, unto their utter
destruction, saith the Lamb of God; not the
destruction of the soul, save it be the casting of it into that hell which hath no end.
1 Nephi 15:13–20
Messiah shall be manifested in body unto the children of men, then shall the fulness of the
gospel of the
Messiah come unto
the Gentiles, and from
the Gentiles unto
the remnant of our seed—And at that day shall
the remnant of our seed
know that they are of the house of Israel, and that they are the covenant people of the Lord;
and then shall they
know and come
to the knowledge of their forefathers, and also
to the knowledge of the gospel
of their Redeemer, which was ministered unto their fathers by him; wherefore,
they shall come to the knowledge
of their Redeemer and the very points of his doctrine, that they may know how
to come unto him and be saved. And then
at that day will they not rejoice and give praise unto their everlasting God,
their rock and their salvation? Yea,
at that day,
will they not receive the strength and nourishment from the true vine? Yea,
will they not come unto the true fold of God? Behold, I say unto you, Yea;
they shall be remembered again among the house of Israel;
they shall be grafted in, being a natural branch of the
olive-tree, into the true
olive-tree. And this is what our
father meaneth,
he meaneth that it will not come to pass until after they are scattered by
the Gentiles; and he meaneth that it shall come by way of
the Gentiles, that the Lord may show his power unto
the Gentiles, for the very cause that he shall be rejected of the Jews, or of
the house of Israel. Wherefore, our father hath not spoken of our seed alone,
but also of all
the house of Israel, pointing to the
covenant which should be fulfilled in the latter days; which
covenant the Lord made to our father Abraham, saying: In thy seed shall all the
kindreds of the earth be blessed. And it came to pass that I, Nephi,
spake much unto them concerning these things; yea, I
spake unto them concerning the restoration of the Jews in the latter days. And I did rehearse unto
them the words of Isaiah, who
spake concerning the restoration of the Jews, or of the house of Israel …
1 Nephi 19:3–4
wherefore, the things which transpired before I made these plates are, of a truth, more particularly made mention upon the first
plates. And after I had made these
plates by way of
commandment, I, Nephi, received a
commandment that the ministry and the prophecies, the more plain and
precious parts of them, should be
written upon these plates; and that the things which were
written should be kept for the instruction of my people, who should possess the
land, and also for other wise
purposes, which
purposes are known unto the Lord. Wherefore, I, Nephi, did make a record upon
the other plates, which gives an
account, or which gives a greater
account of the wars and contentions and destructions of my people. And this have
I done, and commanded my people what they should do after
I was gone; and that these plates should be handed down from one generation
to another, or from one prophet
to another, until further commandments of the Lord.
1 Nephi 22:9–12
And it shall also be of worth
unto the Gentiles; and not only
unto the Gentiles but unto all the house of Israel, unto the making known of the
covenants of the Father of heaven unto Abraham, saying: In thy seed shall all the
kindreds of the earth be blessed. And I would, my brethren, that ye should know that all the
kindreds of the earth cannot be blessed unless he shall
make bare his arm in the eyes of the nations. Wherefore, the Lord God will proceed to
make bare his arm in the eyes of all the nations, in
bringing about his covenants and his gospel unto those who are of the house of Israel. Wherefore, he will
bring them again out of captivity …
2 Nephi 1:13
O that ye would
awake;
awake from a deep
sleep, yea, even from the
sleep of hell, and shake off the awful
chains by which ye are bound, which are the
chains which bind the children of men …
2 Nephi 2:13
And if ye shall say there is no law, ye shall also say there is
no sin. If ye shall say there is
no sin, ye shall also say there is
no righteousness. And if there be
no righteousness there be
no happiness. And if there be no righteousness
nor happiness there be no punishment nor misery. And if these things are not there is
no God. And if there is
no God we are not, neither the earth; for there could have been no creation of
things, neither to act nor to be acted upon; wherefore, all
things must have vanished away.
2 Nephi 9:6
… there must needs be a power of
resurrection, and the
resurrection must needs come unto man by reason of the
fall; and the
fall came by reason of transgression ...
2 Nephi 9:25–26
Wherefore, he has given a
law; and where there is no
law given there is no
punishment; and where there is no
punishment there is no
condemnation; and where there is no
condemnation the mercies of the Holy One of Israel have claim upon them, because of the
atonement; for they are delivered by the power of him. For the
atonement satisfieth the demands of his justice
2 Nephi 31:2
speak concerning the doctrine of Christ; wherefore, I shall
speak unto you plainly, according to the
plainness of my prophesying. For my soul delighteth in
plainness; for after this manner doth the
Lord God work among the children of men. For the
Lord God giveth light unto the
understanding; for he speaketh unto men according to their language, unto their
understanding.
Mosiah 2:17–19
And behold, I tell you these things
that ye may learn wisdom;
that ye may learn that when ye are in the
service of your fellow beings ye are only in the
service of your God. Behold,
ye have called me your king; and if I, whom
ye call your king, do
labor to serve you, then ought not ye to
labor to serve one another? And behold also, if I, whom ye call
your king, who has spent his days in your
service, and yet has been in the
service of God, do merit any
thanks from you, O how you ought to
thank your heavenly King!
Alma 5:37–39
O ye workers of iniquity;
ye that are puffed up in the vain things of the world,
ye that have professed to have known the ways of righteousness nevertheless
have gone astray, as sheep having no
shepherd, notwithstanding a
shepherd hath
called after you and is still
calling after you, but ye will not hearken unto his voice!
Behold, I say unto you, that the good shepherd doth
call you; yea, and in his own name he doth
call you, which is the
name of Christ; and if ye will not hearken unto the voice of the good shepherd, to the
name by which ye are called, behold, ye are not the
sheep of the good shepherd. And now if ye are not the
sheep of the good shepherd,
of what fold are ye? Behold, I say unto you, that the devil is your shepherd, and ye are
of his fold; and now, who can
deny this? Behold, I say unto you, whosoever
denieth this is a liar and a child of the devil.
Alma 13:22
Yea, and the
voice of the Lord, by the
mouth of angels, doth
declare it unto all nations; yea, doth
declare it, that they may have
glad tidings of great joy; yea, and he doth sound these
glad tidings among all his people …
Alma 32:13
And now, because ye are
compelled to be humble blessed are ye; for a man sometimes, if he is
compelled to be humble, seeketh
repentance; and now surely, whosoever
repenteth shall find
mercy; and he that findeth
mercy and endureth to the end the same shall be saved.
Alma 41:13
O, my son, this is not the case; but the meaning of the word restoration is to bring back again
evil for
evil, or
carnal for
carnal, or
devilish for
devilish—
good for that which is
good;
righteous for that which is
righteous;
just for that which is
just;
merciful for that which is
merciful.
Alma 42:17–20
Now, how could a man repent except he should
sin? How could he
sin if there was no
law? How could there be a
law save there was a
punishment? Now, there was a
punishment affixed, and a just
law given, which brought remorse of conscience unto man. Now, if there was no
law given—if a man murdered he should
die—would he be afraid he would
die if he should murder? And also, if there was no law given against
sin men would not be afraid to
sin.
Alma 42:22–23
… if not so, the works of justice would be destroyed, and God would
cease to be God. But God
ceaseth not to be God, and
mercy claimeth the penitent, and
mercy cometh because of the
atonement; and the
atonement bringeth to pass the
resurrection of the dead; and the
resurrection of the dead bringeth back men into the
presence of God; and thus they are restored into his
presence, to be judged according to their works …
Alma 61:8
They have got possession of the land, or the city, of Zarahemla; they have appointed a
king over them, and he hath written unto the
king of the Lamanites, in the which he hath joined an
alliance with him; in the which
alliance he hath agreed to
maintain the city of Zarahemla, which
maintenance he supposeth will enable the Lamanites to conquer the remainder of the land …
Helaman 5:6–8
Behold, I have given unto you the
names of our first parents who came out of the land of Jerusalem;
and this I have done that when you remember your
names
ye may remember them; and when
ye remember them
ye may remember their works; and when
ye remember their works ye may know how that it is said, and also written, that they were
good. Therefore, my sons, I would that ye should do that which is
good, that it may be
said of you, and also written, even as it has been
said and written of them. And now my sons, behold I have somewhat more to
desire of you, which
desire is, that ye may not do
these things that ye may boast, but that ye may do
these things to lay up for yourselves a treasure in heaven, yea, which is
eternal, and which fadeth not away; yea, that ye may have that precious gift of
eternal life, which we have reason to suppose hath been given to our fathers.
Mormon 9:11–13
But behold, I will show unto you a
God of miracles, even the
God of Abraham, and the
God of Isaac, and the
God of Jacob; and it is that same
God who
created the heavens and the earth, and all things that in them are. Behold he
created
Adam, and by
Adam came the
fall of man. And because of the
fall of man came
Jesus Christ, even the Father and the Son; and because of
Jesus Christ came the
redemption of man. And because of the
redemption of man, which came by Jesus Christ, they are brought back into the presence of the Lord …
Ether 3:15–16
And
never have I showed myself unto man whom I have created, for
never has man believed in me as thou hast. Seest thou that ye are
created after mine own image? Yea, even all men were
created in the beginning after mine own image. Behold, this body, which ye now behold, is the
body of my spirit; and man have I created after the
body of my spirit; and even as
I appear unto thee to be in the spirit will
I appear unto my people in the flesh.
Moroni 8:25–26
And the first fruits of repentance is
baptism; and
baptism cometh by faith unto the
fulfilling the commandments; and the
fulfilling the commandments bringeth
remission of sins; And the
remission of sins bringeth
meekness, and lowliness of heart; and because of
meekness and lowliness of heart cometh the visitation of the
Holy Ghost, which
Comforter filleth with hope and perfect
love, which
love endureth by diligence unto prayer…
Moroni 10:20–22
Wherefore,
there must be faith; and if
there must be faith
there must also be hope; and
if there must be hope there must also be
charity. And except ye have
charity ye can in nowise be
saved in the kingdom of God; neither can ye be
saved in the kingdom of God if ye have not faith; neither can ye if ye have no
hope. And if ye have no
hope ye must needs be in
despair; and
despair cometh because of iniquity.
Moroni 10:32–34
Yea, come unto Christ, and be perfected in him, and
deny yourselves of all ungodliness; and if ye shall
deny yourselves of all ungodliness and love God with all your might,
mind and strength, then is his grace sufficient for you, that by his
grace ye may be perfect in Christ; and if by the
grace of God ye are perfect in Christ, ye can in
nowise deny the power of God. And again, if ye by the grace of God are perfect in Christ, and
deny not his power, then are ye sanctified in Christ by the grace of God …
- 1. It is also variously referred to as “climax,” “staircase,” “ladder,” or “anadiplosis.”
- 2. Donald W. Parry, Poetic Parallelisms in the Book of Mormon: The Complete Text Reformatted (Provo, UT: Neal A. Maxwell Institute for Religious Scholarship, 2007), xxvi.
- 3. Parry, Poetic Parallelisms, xxvi. The following examples are adapted from Parry, Poetic Parallelisms, xxvi; E. W. Bullinger, Figures of Speech Used in the Bible (London: Eyre & Spottiswoode, 1989), 256–259.
- 4. These consistencies were brought to the attention of Book of Mormon Central staff by Mark Jasinski.
- 5. It has fewer repetitions, a good amount of extra non-repetitive content, and less rhetorical significance, meaning that it doesn’t seem to build up to a climactic or logical conclusion.
- 6. All examples are either adapted from or precisely follow the formatting in Parry, Poetic Parallelisms.