Evidence #84 | September 19, 2020
Book of Mormon Evidence: Editorial Promises
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Scripture Central

Abstract
The Book of Mormon’s numerous editorial promises (commitments made by its authors to discuss or revisit certain topics) are consistently and accurately fulfilled.On many occasions, Book of Mormon authors and editors informed readers that they would later discuss or revisit certain topics. For example, after recording that King Mosiah would give his sons permission to preach to the Lamanites, Mormon promised to “give an account of their proceedings hereafter” (Mosiah 28:9). Mormon fulfills this promise 18 chapters later in Alma 17–27. Such commitments, sometimes referred to as “editorial promises,” are plentifully scattered throughout the Book of Mormon.
Many of these promises are fulfilled immediately in the text. Others undergo sustained or intermittent discussion before being fulfilled. And a good number of them (more than 60) are separated from their fulfillments by at least a chapter or more of text (see appendix). These delayed fulfillments are especially notable. As explained by John A. Tvedtnes, “An author may promise in the course of writing to return to a subject later to supply further details. Actually keeping such a promise can prove difficult. Even with modern writing aids, memory can betray a person into failing to tuck in the corners of plot or information.”1
In addition, varying types of fulfillments sometimes overlap in complex ways. As demonstrated in the appendix, 1 Nephi 1 contains at least 20 editorial promises. Some of them are quickly fulfilled in the same chapter, but most are intermittently fulfilled throughout the rest of the 1 Nephi. Keeping track of so many overlapping commitments and fulfillments would be a difficult task for any author, especially throughout a lengthy text like the Book of Mormon. Yet, the book’s editorial promises are consistently and accurately fulfilled, even when they are separated from their fulfillments by large amounts of text.
Book of Mormon Central, “Why Should Readers Pay Attention to the Book of Mormon’s Editorial Promises? (3 Nephi 18:37),” KnoWhy 510 (April 11, 2019).
Thomas W. Mackay, “Mormon as Editor: A Study in Colophons, Headers, and Source Indicators,” Journal of Book of Mormon Studies 2, no. 2 (1993): 90–109.
John A. Tvedtnes, “Mormon’s Editorial Promises,” in Rediscovering the Book of Mormon: Insights You May Have Missed Before, ed. John L. Sorenson and Melvin J. Thorne (Salt Lake City and Provo, UT: Deseret Book and FARMS, 1991), 29–31.
Editorial Promises * Promises separated from their fulfillment by more than five verses ** Promises separated from their fulfillment by large amounts of text (typically a chapter or more) | ||
Topic | Promise | Fulfillment |
An Account of Lehi and His Family Will Be Given | ||
**The Lord Will Warn Lehi to Leave Jerusalem | ||
*Lehi Will Prophesy unto the People Concerning Their Iniquity | ||
*The People Will Seek to Kill Lehi | ||
**A Three Day Journey Will Be Discussed | ||
**Lehi’s Sons Will Return to Jerusalem for the Brass Plates | ||
**An Account of Suffering Will Be Given | ||
**Lehi’s Sons Will Take Wives | ||
**Lehi’s Family Will Depart into the Wilderness | ||
**An Account of Suffering and Afflictions in the Wilderness Will Be Given | ||
**The Course of Lehi’s Travels Will Be Given | ||
**Lehi’s Group Will Come to Large Waters | ||
**Nephi’s Brothers Will Rebel against Him | ||
**Nephi Will Confound His Brothers | ||
**Nephi Will Build a Ship | ||
**A Location Will Be Called Bountiful | ||
**Lehi’s Group Will Cross Large Waters and Arrive in a Promised Land | ||
**Nephi Will Give an Abbreviated Account of His Father’s record | ||
**Nephi Will First Abridge Lehi’s Record, Then Make His Own | ||
*Nephi Will Show That the Lord Chooses (Favors) the Righteous and Faithful | ||
**Nephi Will Show the Lord’s Power of Deliverance | ||
No Genealogy Will Be Given | ||
**Nephi Commands Posterity to Not Occupy Plates with Things of No Worth | ||
**Nephi’s Plates Will Be Handed Down from One Prophet to Another | ||
**An Account of Making Plates Will Be Given Hereafter | ||
**Nephi Will Proceed to Give a Spiritual Account after He Gives an Account of Making His Small Plates | ||
Nephi Will Read the Words of Isaiah | ||
**Nephi Will Liken the Scriptures unto His People | ||
**An Account of Lehi’s Death Will Be Given | ||
**Nephi’s Brothers Will Rebel | ||
**The Lord Will Warn Nephi to Depart into the Wilderness | ||
**Nephi’s Journey in the Wilderness Will Be Given | ||
Lehi Will Speak to the People | ||
Lehi Will Speak to Jacob | ||
Lehi Will Speak to Joseph | ||
Nephi Will Speak of the Prophecies of Joseph Who Was Carried into Egypt | ||
Lehi Will Speak to Laman’s Posterity | ||
Lehi Will Speak to Lemuel’s Posterity | ||
Jacob’s Words Will Be Given | ||
Jacob Will Read Words from Isaiah | ||
Jacob Will Declare the Rest of His Words on the Morrow | ||
Jacob Will Speak of a Righteous Branch | ||
*Nephi Will Write More of Isaiah’s Words | ||
**Nephi Will Liken Isaiah’s Words to His People | ||
Nephi Will Comment upon Isaiah’s Words Which He Had Written | ||
*Nephi Will Show His People That the Judgements of God Come upon All Nations | ||
Nephi Will Proceed with His Own Prophecy According to His Plainness | ||
*Nephi Will Particularly Speak to Those Who Doubt the Worth of His Words | ||
*Nephi Will Confine His Words to His Own People | ||
Nephi Will Show His Posterity That They Aren’t More Righteous Than the Gentiles | ||
Nephi Will Prophesy More Concerning the Jews and Gentiles | ||
Nephi Will Make an End of His Prophesying | ||
Nephi Will Speak Plainly Concerning the Doctrine of Christ | ||
Jacob’s Preaching Will Be Recorded | ||
**Jacob Will Confound A Man Who Contends against the Doctrine of Christ | ||
*Jacob Will Give Some Words Concerning the History of His People | ||
**Jacob Will Group Lehi’s Seven Tribes as Either Nephites or Lamanites | ||
*Jacob Will Tell the People Concerning the Wickedness of Their Thoughts and Actions | ||
Jacob Will Show How the Jews Will Be Redeemed after Rejecting Their Redeemer | ||
Jacob Will Confound Sherem | ||
Enos Will Tell about His Wrestle with the Lord | ||
Enos Will Tell about His Remission of Sins | ||
Jarom Won’t Write about His Prophecies or Revelations | ||
**Mormon Will Deliver Plates to Moroni | ||
**Moroni May Write Concerning the Destruction of His People | ||
**Moroni May Write Concerning Christ | ||
**Mormon Will Include Nephi’s Small Plates at the End of His Record2 | ||
**King Benjamin Will Declare That Mosiah Will Be King | ||
**King Benjamin Will Give His People a Name | ||
King Limhi Will Cause His People to Rejoice on the Morrow | ||
The Record of Zeniff’s People Will Be Given | ||
Abinadi Will Read the Remainder of the Commandments | ||
An Account of Alma and His People Will Be Given | ||
**An Account of Baptism Will Be Given | ||
Mormon Will Show Readers That the Nephites Were Put into Bondage | ||
*Mormon Will Show Readers That Only the Lord Could Deliver the Nephites | ||
**An Account of the Sons of Mosiah Will Be Given | ||
**An Account of the Jaredites Will Be Given | ||
Mosiah’s Written Words Will Be Given | ||
An Account of Alma, the Son of Alma Will Be Given | ||
Alma Is the Chief Judge3 | ||
An Account of the Reign of the Judges Will Be Given | ||
**An Account of Contention and Wars among the People (Nephites) Will Be Given | ||
**An Account of War between the Nephites and Lamanites Will Be Given | ||
Return to Account of Amlicites | ||
An Account Will Be Given of Alma’s Words Delivered in Cities and Villages | ||
Alma’s Words to the People in Gideon Will Be Given | ||
**Alma and Amulek Will Be Given Special Divine Power | ||
**Alma and Amulek Will Not Be Confined in Dungeons | ||
**It Won’t Be Possible for Men to Slay Alma and Amulek | ||
**Alma and Amulek Won’t Exercise Power until Bound and Cast into Prison | ||
The Words of Alma Will Be Given | ||
*The Words of Amulek Will Also Be Given | ||
**Alma and Amulek Will Be Cast into Prison | ||
**Alma and Amulek Will Be Delivered by Divine Power | ||
**Lawyers Plan to Remember Alma and Amulek’s Words Against Them | ||
Alma Will Explain the Fall | ||
An Account of the Sons of Mosiah Will Be Given | ||
*An Account of the Sufferings of the Sons of Mosiah Will Be Given | ||
**An Account of the Deliverance of the Sons of Mosiah Will Be Given | ||
Ammon Will Show His Power So Others Will Believe His Words | ||
An Account Will Be Given of the Preaching of Aaron, Muloki, and Their Brethren | ||
Return to Account of Aaron and His brethren | ||
Return to the Account of the Sons of Mosiah | ||
Alma Will Inquire of the Lord | ||
*The Nephites Will Give the Land of Jershon to the People of Ammon | ||
**An Account of War in the 18th Year Will Be Given | ||
The Commandments of Alma to His Son Helaman | ||
Alma Will Speak of the Jaredite Record | ||
The Commandments of Alma to His Son Shiblon | ||
The Commandments of Alma to His Son Corianton | ||
Alma Will Discuss the Coming of Christ | ||
Alma Will Explain the Meaning of Restoration | ||
Alma Will Explain the Justice of God | ||
No More Will Be Said about the Ministry of Alma and His Sons | ||
Return to War Account | ||
An Account Will Be given of Wars and Dissensions in the Days of Helaman | ||
Return to the Account of Amalickiah and Those Who Fled with Him | ||
*Readers Will See That Amalickiah’s Promise Was Rash | ||
Helaman Will Show That They Accomplished Their Desire to Obtain the City Cumeni | ||
An Account of Wars and Contentions Will Be Given | ||
*The Account Is According to the Record of Helaman and His Sons | ||
**An Account Will Be Given of the Conversion of Many Lamanites | ||
**An Account of the Righteousness of the Lamanites Will Be Given | ||
**An Account and Abominations of the Nephites Will Be Given | ||
**Gadianton Will Be Spoken of Hereafter | ||
**In the End of Nephi’s Book, Readers Will See How Gadianton Caused the Destruction of Nearly the Entire Nephite Nation | ||
Nephi Will Give Prophecies | ||
*God Will Threaten the People with Utter Destruction | ||
**God Will Smite the People with Pestilence | ||
**The People Will Repent and Turn to God | ||
**Samuel the Lamanite Will Prophesy unto the Nephites | ||
The Prophecy of Samuel the Lamanite Will Be Given | ||
**Mormon’s Writings Will Record Events up until His Day | ||
**Mormon Will Make a Record of Things He Personally Witnessed | ||
Mormon Will Show That the People Didn’t Establish a King4 | ||
**Mormon Will Show Readers That the Spared Nephites and Lamanites Will Have Great Favors Shown unto Them | ||
*The Lamanites Will No Longer Be Called Lamanites | ||
*Soon after His Ascension, Christ Will Manifest Himself to the People | ||
*An Account of Christ’s Ministry Will Be Given | ||
*Jesus Will Show Himself to Those Gathered at Bountiful | ||
**Mormon Will Show That Disciples Were Given Power to Give the Holy Ghost | ||
Christ Will Give a Sign | ||
Christ Will Give the Words of Malachi | ||
**After Giving the Words of Malachi, Christ Will Expound upon Them | ||
Mormon Will Make a Record of Things He Has Seen and Heard | ||
**Mormon Will Remember the Things Ammaron Commanded | ||
**Mormon Won’t Make a Full Account of His People’s Wickedness | ||
Lamanites Won’t Attack for Ten Years | ||
The Nephites Will Lose Battles from This Time Forward | ||
Mormon Will Speak to a Remnant | ||
Moroni Will Finish Mormon’s Record | ||
Moroni Will Write Before Hiding up Records | ||
Moroni Will Make an End of Speaking of His People | ||
Moroni Will Speak As If Future Readers Are Present5 | ||
Moroni Will Speak to Those Who Don’t Believe in Christ | ||
Moroni Will Show unto Readers a God of Miracles | ||
The Record of the Jaredites Will be Given | ||
Moroni Will Give the Account of the Jaredites | ||
*Moroni Will Give a Shortened Account from the Tower to the Jaredite Destruction | ||
Moroni Will Return to Jaredite Record | ||
Moroni Will Give an Account of Jared and His Brother | ||
Moroni Will Not Write about Wicked Oaths and Combinations | ||
Moroni Will Proceed with the Jaredite Record | ||
Moroni Will Discuss Faith | ||
Moroni Will Finish the Jaredite Record | ||
Moroni Won’t Write More of Ether’s Prophecies about the Last Days | ||
Moroni Will Write a Few More Things | ||
The Words of Christ to His 12 Disciples Will Be Given | ||
The Manner of Priesthood Ordinations Will Be Given | ||
The Manner of Administering the Sacrament Bread Will Be Given | ||
The Manner of Administering the Sacrament Wine Will Be Given | ||
Moroni Will Speak of Baptism | ||
Mormon’s Sermon on Faith, Hope, and Charity Will Be Given | ||
An Epistle from Mormon to Moroni Will Be Given | ||
A Second Epistle from Mormon to Moroni Will Be Given | ||
Moroni Will Speak to His Brethren the Lamanites | ||
Moroni Will Speak Some Words of Exhortation Before He Seals Up the Record | ||
Moroni Will Speak to All the Ends of the Earth |
- 1. John A. Tvedtnes, “Mormon’s Editorial Promises,” in Rediscovering the Book of Mormon: Insights You May Have Missed Before, ed. John L. Sorenson and Melvin J. Thorne (Salt Lake City and Provo, UT: Deseret Book and FARMS, 1991), 29–31. It should be remembered that Joseph Smith didn’t have modern writing aids, like a computer with a search engine, at his disposal. In fact, according to eyewitnesses, he didn’t use any notes or reference materials while translating the Book of Mormon. See John W. Welch, “The Miraculous Timing of the Translation of the Book of Mormon,” in Opening the Heavens: Accounts of Divine Manifestations, 1820–1844, ed. John W. Welch, 2nd edition (Salt Lake City and Provo, UT: Deseret Book and BYU Press, 2017), 143, 168; Daniel C. Peterson, “Editor's Introduction—Not So Easily Dismissed: Some Facts for Which Counterexplanations of the Book of Mormon Will Need to Account,” FARMS Review 17, no. 2 (2005): xiii–xvi; Royal Skousen, “How Joseph Smith Translated the Book of Mormon: Evidence from the Original Manuscript,” Journal of Book of Mormon Studies 7, no. 1 (1998): 24.
- 2. Evidence that Mormon fulfilled this promise comes from the order in which the books in the Book of Mormon were translated. See Book of Mormon Central, “How Does the ‘Mosiah-First’ Translation Sequence Strengthen Faith? (Words of Mormon 1:5),” KnoWhy 503 (February 22, 2019).
- 3. Although Alma delivered up the judgment-seat, he retained his position as high priest (see Alma 4:16–20).
- 4. Mormon mentioned that Jacob became a king (3 Nephi 7:9–10), but not a king of the people. Rather he was a king of the wicked band who separated themselves from the people (3 Nephi 7:11).
- 5. Moroni technically began speaking in this manner in Mormon 8:33, but his comment still signals to future readers that his following statements will be directed at them.